Two lines only

Two lines only

A Poem by Laura E. Aranda
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written for the contest "Two lines only"

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With but only two lines to finish this masterpiece, I pause.....a heartbeat.....

Then, I know how to finish this work of art, so I pick up my pen one last time.

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© 2011 Laura E. Aranda


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I love your simplicity! Its beautiful and poignant.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Nuff said! Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


You have done it again! I get this image of a writer hunched over a desk with pen in hand about to touch the page of a manuscript, face contorted by concentration, about to go in for the long haul and finish the work at hand. Very nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is wonderful, very well put together, so much meaning in such a few words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


What a great reminder that art doesn't finish itself, we must use our imaginations and creativity.

Great how you can say so much in so few words, excellent.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sorprendentemente bello. [Amazingly beautiful.]

For two lines, it's very good. :]

I enjoyed reading very much.

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this because it is a reminder to me that in the dryest of seasons, the most intimidating writer's blocks, I need only remember God's gift of breath and life are still mine to savor. The heartbeat is a tap on my shoulder that says, "You're alive. Bring some joy into this world I made."

Sal

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful two lines, thanks for joining the contest. P.W.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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