Happiness.....

Happiness.....

A Poem by AveTN
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Just a short sentiment on happiness.

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Happiness....

So close it can be seen and heard, yet the distance is insurmountable.

A notion touched only by the senses, never by the heart.

A luxury to be witnessed but never experienced, craved but never obtained.

A dream never to reach the face of reality.

A hope that remains just that, and nothing more…

© 2014 AveTN


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Very lovely and uniquely written....Short yet very thought provoking.....Real happiness is something that can only be felt with a conscious decision.....I loved it....Full ratings.....Loved the first two lines most.....

Posted 5 Years Ago


Happiness for me has always been the reconciling of past events against future knowledge, well done, good read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


AveTN

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Thomas Fitzgerald

7 Years Ago

Your welcome.
that is just it, exactly as you have written,the mindset of the human mind, imagine if we found total happiness, how quickly would we become bored, we seem to have some instinct for mixing the bitter with the sweet, maybe it's the notion of mortality.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on March 14, 2014
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Tags: happiness, depression, sadness, joy, gladness, poem, poetry, hope

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A Poem by AveTN