The Casanova

The Casanova

A Poem by Avinash
"

It's pretty much like this

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Distracted and Confused
Eyes Red
Heart pounding
Breathe uneven
Can't take my minds
off the thought
yet to become reality
I wait for the time
When hell and heaven
will be on my side
and I will pick her up 
Give all I have
I finish it
Leave her on her own
Now Back to the prowl
to write another poem.

© 2013 Avinash


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Perfection!
comparing Casanova's talent with the ladies, how he goes from one to another with a poet jumping from poem to poem

i like how the poem spreads, neatly yet with some rebelness in it, i liked the confidence of the character, this is genuine with a touch of fiction.
brilliant

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avinash

6 Years Ago

:) Thanks for your kind review and your beautiful words of encouragement mean a lot to me
Salar Majak

6 Years Ago

:) Always a pleasure



Reviews

"Leave her on her own
Now Back to the prowl" In the search for another prey to pounce on.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Avinash

6 Years Ago

It could be another poem or in the fantasy world of Casanova..another lady.
Bad Casanova, good read. I like how you ended on a poetic note. Nicely pen'd.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avinash

6 Years Ago

Thanks ! But I still think ladies find the character unable to resist :)
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

He's a bad boy, ha...we're all crazy. ;-) My pleasure....
Clever...makes me think on said actions...the primalness to them...where the emotions fit into place...along the way...great piece x

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avinash

6 Years Ago

Thanks Poppy.. that also explains his success with women :)
Perfection!
comparing Casanova's talent with the ladies, how he goes from one to another with a poet jumping from poem to poem

i like how the poem spreads, neatly yet with some rebelness in it, i liked the confidence of the character, this is genuine with a touch of fiction.
brilliant

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avinash

6 Years Ago

:) Thanks for your kind review and your beautiful words of encouragement mean a lot to me
Salar Majak

6 Years Ago

:) Always a pleasure
Does this casanova ravish a poem to completion, then leave it for another?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Avinash

6 Years Ago

U got it right Marie :)
Well....I wish I were that Casanova in your poem.....Good work Avinash....You have a lot of stuff....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Well indeed this is an excellent description of a cassanova.You have done this most superbly Avinash :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


So develishly evil!! Superb. Go on write another 1.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Superb Avinash.
You have another winner here.
Your knack for hitting the bull's eye is as uncanny as it is irresistible!
Thanks for sharing this stunner!
Keep writing....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avinash

6 Years Ago

Thanks Divya . It is always delightful to have your inputs..
DIVYA

6 Years Ago

You are welcome Avinash. Looking forward to more such delightful writes.
Have a great day!

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Added on December 30, 2013
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Tags: Casanova, Love, Seduction

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Avinash
Avinash

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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