Hate Child

Hate Child

A Poem by Avinash
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Things beyond comprehension

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She disgusted him
He abused her
after being loathed
verbally and otherwise

A fairytale it was -
never supposed to be
She cheated on him
and made him crazy

Still don't know what happened
they did not separate
It's okay she was wrong
and he is long gone

But what made them bring
A Hate Child
In this world
looking for true love

© 2014 Avinash


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Wow. A very hitting question. In few yet powerful words. Lot of pull in your writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Powerful punch this one, right in the gut...last stanza is killer. Happens all too often. Well said!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice take on a real life situation.

"But what made them bring
A Hate Child
In this world
looking for true love"

Too often we plan things that don't go right. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So 1st of all i can say this one of yours is simply kickass.
It made me emotional.
I know how a child becomes a victim of hatred and violence because of his parents acts. He grows up by seeing all these violence and abuses in front of his eyes. And if in future that child becomes a criminal or something just blame the parents for that.
This poem reminds me of one of my all time fav movie " santa sangre"
Great job dude ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Life seldoms plans out how we think it will. I love your poetry, always hits the most potent of emotions, you leave no vision or word wasted! x

Posted 6 Years Ago


Avinash

6 Years Ago

Right said Poppy. It flows like water and we all get washed away in it and so does our dreams.
read more
CHILDREN I THINK SHOULD NOT BE BROUGHT INTO A WORLD WHERE THE PARENTS CAN BARELY TOLERATE ONE ANOTHER IT IS WRONG.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Just proves that we can create monsters by our actions. This is an interesting piece as you reflect on how the hate brought more hate. I enjoyed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avinash

6 Years Ago

Thanks..Its great that you liked it. Helps in going for some more.
Reminds me of sumthing too personal. An excellent write though.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

People mat for the wrong reasons and have children for the wrong reasons,,,and the children grow up to do the same.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The poem told a real story for many. Children play for the mistake and foolishness of the adults. You said a lot in the poem. Kids need love and kindness. Very hard for one parent. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Avinash

6 Years Ago

Thanks for reading. Yes without ensuring the shed of love from both parents no seed should be sown .. read more

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Added on January 7, 2014
Last Updated on January 7, 2014
Tags: Life, Separation, Cheating, Child, Love

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Avinash
Avinash

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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