The rain

The rain

A Poem by avishkar1920

The rain has the power to make everything wet Our heart too..

The dark room promoted some dark thoughts in my mind...

I was thinking..Just thinking.. laying on my bed

The whole city outside was dark

It was totally filled with large, mellifluous noises of wind

And suddenly there was a lightning which brightened the whole room

It just feeled as a 'Deja Vu'
Only the part missing was 'You'

In no time, I was in my epoch

Everytime there was lightning
There was a 'you' hugging me tightly

That night we were on the bed with the same lightning in the dark skies...

Your hug just felt as a chrysalis....
The warm breath was melting my iced heart
That moment was a total oblivion but a clone of heaven for me..

In no time I was back in the present

The petrichor was filling my heart

I was observing your photo beside my bed

The lightning was no more

The rain had already started....

© 2018 avishkar1920

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beautiful and heartfelt poem

Posted 3 Years Ago

Nice; I especially like the line'Your hug felt as a chrysalis'.

Posted 3 Years Ago

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Added on August 23, 2018
Last Updated on August 23, 2018
Tags: Rain, Death, Philosopher, Life, Love



Maharashtra , Pune, India

Love is everything more..