Marionette

Marionette

A Poem by chaotic katie

Tell me how to wear my hair,

When nobody ever even cares,

Pick out all my clothes,

Make me paint my fingers and toes,

You hold the strings,

In this messed up circus ring,

Things have stopped making sense,

I’m left hung up in suspense,

Don’t have a voice,

Don’t have a choice,

Slowly tearing at the seams,

Until the day I cut these strings.

© 2013 chaotic katie


Author's Note

chaotic katie
A venting piece like most all my poetry.

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i liked it again because it is first which i read on w.c

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice artistic clairvoyance. but if I may, I think (which is most likely wrong) that you wrote this after encountering some sort of resistance that your eccentric lifestyle would not permit to be added to your persona. for example a person you felt compelled to talk to that disagreed with your perspectives that pertain to your lifestyle. I just think the common person would see this as you writing out against something in average society is making you do when really its the upkeep in your choice of Goth, rebellion, Christianity, what ever you maintain. its these demanding characteristics that dominate your life, and the conflict is the inner turmoil of the desired.

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

yeah, it was a venting piece about my mom trying to make me her barbie doll.
wowm another well penned write....don't you thnk it's like RHYMIN' ....yeah..i can figure it out because i'm a rhymer too....good write...
what "A VENTIN' PIECE"...yeah...i do agree with it..this's a one...as i read a before ago, but this;s much better to read ..i liked + loved = enjoyed this much...:)

I think the theme alittle bit's similair with "my place"....isn't it ?
by the way....well captured all moments here...

beautiful piece, ...
but hy, how you arisen this idea ???????? if may i ask ?


Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

Things that happen to me. Its my way of releasing all of my emotion usually free verse stuff i put t.. read more
Criss ;)

10 Years Ago

I knew that....."katie"...because when i was here you always said the same one......i just wanted to.. read more
chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

thank you once again
Amazing imagery... Great work. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Felt like a marionette at the mercy of others? That's a brilliant image to convey. Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

agreed, i added them to my ever growing collection of music
Simon Welsh

10 Years Ago

Hell yeah :) if ya want anymore suggestions then check my blog.
chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

will do
I really like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

thanks :3
very good poem i like that

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

thanks
I like this piece i just don't it when you feel this way. Just think that right now things are bad but it could also be worse. I am here always. I may not be able to see you anymore but i will always be here. When you feel like this just think of me. love ya sis

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

love yah too
This piece I like a whole lot !!!
It's really well said =D
This just screams awesomeness =P

"Slowly tearing at the seams,
Until the day I cut these strings."

WoW


Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

glad you like it

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chaotic katie

Canton, OH



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Greetings darling writers, allow me to explain a bit about myself. I started writing when I was 13 and fell in love with it. Over the years I have won 2 awards for it. I keep most of my old works pos.. more..

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