I am an egg.

I am an egg.

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ
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It's kind of depressing and kind of weird and kind of funny and it's just fucked up XP

"
  I am plain and boring
  on the outside, but on
  the inside I am
  bright and happy.
  I am broken,
  and scared of
  being broken again.
  I am no one.
  I am just a stupid egg. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
This is kind of bad.

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This is very good. I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

no! this is very nice. Indeed! Actually I was reminded of The Beatles' "I Am The Walrus"! It's a promising piece of poetry :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow thats Interesting! i like this a lot it work nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice metaphor!

This poem seems simple enough, but gives one a lot to think about as they look beneath the surface.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's not bad at all. I like the imagery. I can imagine being an egg and being afraid to break. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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