...But you won't.

  I want to hug you.

  I want you to kiss

  away my tears.

  I want you to 

  love me.

  I want you to 

  be mine.

  But you won't.

  You never will.

Author's Note

Short & pretty fucking awful.

Reviews

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

This may be short but it's really freakin' powerful
Nice write
i loved the straightforward approach
No f****n' about

[Eile MacIntyre]

So sad. Written well. I enjoyed it. The end has a finality that is sad but doesn't really seem it at the same time. To me, at least, feels like a coming to terms.

[Helpless]

:'( awww..... i'm so sorry you have had to go through, i know how you feel. i do too. it amazing how you and other writers just seem to be saying everything that i have been feeling and not able to put words to yet. your not alone.

[Ice]

This poem is just kind of thoughts put into lines, not awful, just could use more effort. I know the feeling of it though. "But you won't. You never will." Maybe add some imagery or something of the sort. I know exactly how you feel.

[~Lizzy♬]

It's not awful! I think if you put your feelings down into your poems, it's an amazing poem. I can see your hurt in this poem, I'm sorry about that... :( If you ever wanna talk to someone, I'm always here. :)

~Lizzard~