Smile

  When you see me,

  walking alone,

  I will smile.

  I will smile

  and wave and

  say I am alright.

  Then when you

  are out of my

  sight,

  I will run

  and cry. 

Author's Note

This is bad.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem isn't bad. Us foolish men don't cry we drink. It is better to cry then drink. A poem with a real story. Everybody get heartbroken and have their ways to survive. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[melOH!knee]

holding back tears that fight so valiantly to escape. I think we all know the feeling.

[CharlesMonroe]

It's not bad, it's sweet, but sad. I relate to this to. I really like it (: great job the second Naomi (:

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

I like it too :)

[Short.Nerd]

I like it:)

[A.E. Surdam]

Lovely. So simple and pleasing. I enjoyed reading this refreshing new poem. :)

[SOUL LESS]

This is better...it has a kind of rhythm to it and it has a solid thought behind it.
Though I don't exactly know get where u're coming from. I thing Ali is off the mark. The "run and cry" line rules out her review. It's a strong line.

[Helpless]

awww :(

[Suzy Q]

So short but to the point. So good.