Always second.

Always second.

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ
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Feeling terrible so I wrote a poem.

"
  She will always
  be better.
  She will always have the
  golden trophy.
  She will always have
  you.
  I will never
 be better.
  I will never have
  the golden trophy.
  I will never have you. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


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This just described my exact emotions.
I honestly just want to say thank you for writing this.
Good job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


WOW talk about a poem that I couldn't have read at a better time.....It really speaks to me cu i understand how it feels...it hurts to watch the one you like/love, love/like someone else
Nice job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Repetitive in the sense you said the same thing, but by no means was that a bad thing. It MADE the poem. If it wasn't there, this wouldn't exist. I'm sorry you feel that way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is as the saing goes it is better to have loved and loss than never to have loved at all universal in its appeal and timeless in it's disappointment

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful emotions here. You put a lot of heart into this one.
Just dont let one loser define your life.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm sorry you feel this way. The poem was beautiful though.

~Lizzard~

Posted 12 Years Ago


A direct to the point poem. Sometime we don't support to have all what we need and want. Some people are keepers and some people are runners. You poetry is NO. 1 with me. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its heart breaking to watch someone you feel so deeply about walk away with someone else, i know exactly how you feel....but i'm sure their are going to be tooons of better guys out there who would kill to be with you. Great work...simple and to the point.

Posted 12 Years Ago


There is a lot of emotion within the poem...I know how you feel...I can relate to this poem...good job...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awh ): don't feel terrible. I'm sorry :/ I know how you feel and it sucks :/ but if he don't want you then he's just not good enough. No person is if they hurt you. Remember that okay?

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 8, 2011
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Tags: Jealousy, heart break, depression, poetry, short

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