You are all the same.

You are all the same.

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

This was inspired by the song Rock Star by Hole and by something I am going through right now.

  All of you are 
  the same.

  You look the same.

  You talk the same.

  You probably even
  f**k the same.

  One major thing you all have
  in common, is that you
  hurt me.

  You used me.

  You forgot about me.

  You played my heart
  like it was a guitar.

  And I didn't care.

  I got over it.

  But I still remembered it. 


© 2011 Naomi Roseღ

Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
This is kind of a free verse rant :/ I know its bad.

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There are lots of people who are the same.. this was amazing.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 8 Years Ago

Bad...I think awesome....People out her are all the same.....And this poem is very well written even if it is a free verse rant......The whole thing is my fav..:)

Nice job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

great ending and the whole thing is amazing

Posted 8 Years Ago

You played my heart
like it was a guitar.

I SO-LOVED these lines,
Don't you hate it when people play you like that.
Very nicely stated rant.

Posted 8 Years Ago

its good. I like it. A heart screaming out its plight

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like it:)

Posted 8 Years Ago

It's not bad, it's really good. And I know exactlly how you feel :/ I love how it was inspired by music to, because music is what make me even wanna move in the morning. I like this alot. Props ^-^

Posted 8 Years Ago

A straight to the point poem. I like the directness and the purpose. I believe we are similar but in somethings we want more or less. I like the flow and the story in your words. A excellent poem. Thank you.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on May 8, 2011
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