Finding Naomi

Finding Naomi

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

  I am chipping away
  my skin, and seeing
  the old me return.

  She has been gone
  for too long.

  I have felt her
  inside my stomach,
  pounding on my
  insides demanding
  for her release. 

  I have seen her floating
  in my pupils begging
  to be free again.

  Now she is she.

  The new Naomi is dead.

  The old Naomi has returned
  once again. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


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Naomi Roseღ
I know its not that good :/ Review anyways please

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I'm glad you are back. Sometime hard to gain strength and allow the bad things to fade away and move on. A very good poem. Have fun and be safe.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You remind here of a poem my lady wrote a while back she said the same as you except that the words were different great insight from one so young Braveo!

Posted 8 Years Ago


The idea of it is kind of overused, but its universally relatable, which is good. is the old naomi the one you want to be, or the bad one? please review my story as well, its not all that good, but oh well

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like the first lines. Very good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


loved it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thi is really good. I love the message behind it x

Posted 8 Years Ago


I can relate in some way; but great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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i disagree i believe it is incredible! a self portrait of your soul and not every poet is capable of doing this let alone doing it well. excellent write!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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