Finding Naomi

Finding Naomi

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

  I am chipping away
  my skin, and seeing
  the old me return.

  She has been gone
  for too long.

  I have felt her
  inside my stomach,
  pounding on my
  insides demanding
  for her release. 

  I have seen her floating
  in my pupils begging
  to be free again.

  Now she is she.

  The new Naomi is dead.

  The old Naomi has returned
  once again. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ

Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
I know its not that good :/ Review anyways please

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I can relate in a way...
Because everyone changes and then go back to their old selves and then change again. I think this was a good write. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the poem. I hope my advice worked too. :)


Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 8, 2011
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