I want to be a monster.

I want to be a monster.

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ
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Don't ask XP

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  I want to grow purple
  fur and red fangs.

  I want to scare
  away my enemies
  with my fierce claws.

  I want to be
  the most powerful
  creature out there,
  I wanna be a monster.

  I can run around
  and hide under
  your bed.

  Scare you in 
  the middle of
  night with dread.

  And just when
  you think that 
  your Mommy chased me
  out, I will hide
  in your closet with
  the Boogey Man.

  We will laugh when
  you start the cry
  because you know
  we monsters never die.

  We are always alive
  just waiting to scare
  you. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


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"'I feel it deep within, it's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I hate what I've become, the nightmare's just begun
I must confess that I feel like a monster"

From Monster by Skillet

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice, it has a good meaning to it

Posted 9 Years Ago


I will hide
in your closet with
the Boogey Man.

Liked this part, it was cute,
Very nicely written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice and kind of funny!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This poem was the embodiment of every child's fear! Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


haha i love it:D

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is very creepy,
I like that tone of writing for you, it suits you very well. :)
You take the concept of make-believe monsters much further than it needs to be taken, past the point of tears, and past the point of Mommy being able to make everything all better.
I may not have liked some of your pieces in the past, but I really liked this particular piece for some reason :) GREAT Job!
P.S. I picked up some saracasma and humor to.../

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kinda scared to sleep now.. don't particularly want you under my bed :')
Great poem :D very imaginative! x

Posted 9 Years Ago


Comical and serious, just right needed for the attacks!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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