I'm not everything you think I am

I'm not everything you think I am

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

  I am not nice
  and sweet.
  I am rude 
  and obnoxious.
  I am not pretty
  and dressed in
  pearls.
  I am ugly
  and dressed
  in rags.
  I am not perfect.
  I am not clean.
  I am not amazing.
  So tell me, what
  do you see in a
  person like me?

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
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Please review. I don't want your pity. Be honest.

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Everyone hides behind a mask of their own making. At least you are smart enough to notice that you aren't always what you seem, but you're letting yourself get into that state of mind where you think nothing but horrors about yourself. No one is perfect. Everyone is beautiful. Life is precious. And we must always know that somewhere inside us we are a good person and all those good things. You're a good writer and you use that to convey your feelings and that's perfectly fine just the way it is.

Posted 8 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.




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i really do like it. no pity. it shows that every one has a sort of mask. and some people never really show who they really are. sometimes i feel exactly the same way, like im not good enough. :) it was well written. it shows that nobody is perfect, and that no matter who you are someone willl love you even if you dont understand why they do. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I get where your coming from when you wrote this. But only you can change the voices that lay dormant in your mind. All the comments of people saying that its not true and that you shouldn't feel this way won't help your mind until you decide to truly let yourself believe them. Remember that your lovely, and can write a really great poem. Stay strong Xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No pity. You're not ugly. that's a lie

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 10 people found this review constructive.

Nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 7 people found this review constructive.

Interesting. As a slighly paranoid person i went out with someone once and had all thouse thougts running through my head. Insecuritys shown. Started off reminding me a bit of the pink song. I liked it ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can relate, I am like this all the time, these type of statements going through my mind constantly, I understand x

Posted 8 Years Ago


I would suggest to write a poem about what you are. I do like it . I felt alot of rage from it . Keep it up !

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You know you're own worst enemy...no pity given to you....I'm going through the same thing...Trying to find who I am looking in the mirror and seeing somebody totally different standing there....But I promise you, one day you and me both will actually look in the mirror and be happy cuz we found ourself

Awesome work on the poem, nearly brought me to tears, it has a deep meaning for me

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometime the hardest person is the one looking back in the mirror. Each of us are different. Want more or less. I do my best to look for the good in people. I'm far from perfect and I accept who I'm and what I want. A excellent poem. Need to look hard at people. Look for the good and kindness. Not the weaknesses and mistakes.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 8 people found this review constructive.


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