Where am I?

Where am I?

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

  I don't belong
  in my house, where
  people's looks are like
  nails in your eyes.
  I don't belong in 
  my school, where
  rumors spread like
  mosquitoes.
  I don't belong in
  my skin, where
  I always feel
  out of place.
  Where do I belong?
  Where do I have to
  run to?
  Who do I have to
  run to?
  Answer the questions
  before it starts again. 
  
   

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


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I agree with EMF totally ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i often feel out of place in my own home

Posted 8 Years Ago


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EMF
Unlike other reviewers I have never felt like this, yet this poem brings the emotion to life. It is a powerful poem. If your doing this when your a teenager, what will you be doing when you are in your 40'?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can totally relate to your writing. Great write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Story of my life
I understand exactly how you feel

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like it raw untamed emotion

Posted 8 Years Ago


Where indeed? Everyone has or should have a secret place to go to and gather their wits to think You have to find yours but it dies exist.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Life give us opportunity to find a place where we will learn peace and calm one day. I understand this poem. I seem to be in the wrong place and stuck in the mud.I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wonderful:)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Tags: Poetry, out of place, depression, short

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