I'm sorry I have to kill you...

I'm sorry I have to kill you...

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

   I can feel her inside of
   me, moving and
   breathing.

   She isn't a human yet,
   but I know she is there. 

   I place my hand on
   my stomach and cry.

   I love her.

   I haven't met her,
   but I love her.

   I can't kill someone
   I love.

   I can't do this...

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
I'm too mad at myself and depressed to explain whats going on, but its clearly stated in this...
(I don't want your pity, by the way.)

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:/ Hope you make a decision you don't regret. A nice raw poem though

Posted 12 Years Ago


lovely read. I can definitely feel the emotion coming from your words. I really felt what you were feeling, and thats a big accomplishment. Great stuff. Keep up the good work!

Always,
Carter

p.s. check out my latest story if you have the time, I think you'll like it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


such an emotional write,
Nicely written and powerful

Posted 12 Years Ago


very emotional , great write
alltid
-Meja

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very sad poem. Some decision are personal and will leave a permanent scar on mind and soul. Strong words and emotion in the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Heartbreaking and a little controversiol, good for you for tackling such a hard subject, well done, good read

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow! this is a great poem! i'm sorry that you are going through some hard stuff right now, and altho i can't relate to what i think is going on, i can sympathize...just know that you don't have to be alone, there is always some one to talk to! and i am always a good listener if you wanna chat!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderful job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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