A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

I wrote this on my arm with a purple Sharpie when I was in the hospital today...

that had
is dead.

we used to 
make this 
dream come
true is gone.

All of the
words we whispered
to each other in
the night never

The pure fear
I felt when I 
saw it was true,
died when you

There is nothing
left to hold.

There is nothing
left to cry about.

There are no more
kisses and hugs
and hope.

There is no 
more of 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ

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Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
I know the grammar is horrible. I don't care.

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This is an excellent poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Amazing poem!!

Posted 9 Years Ago

wow! this is son intense!!! its a beautiful piece, full of emotion and longing!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago

The grammar doesn't matter. I know I read this late, but still hope ur alright!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Posted 9 Years Ago

this is very moving, it's a wonderful masterpiece

Posted 9 Years Ago

Awh ): this is so sad, my grammer is way worse, so no worries. This is pretty. I hope your okay (:

Posted 9 Years Ago

awesome! I love dark! you made dark beautiful. forget the grammer. Its about emotion

Posted 9 Years Ago

this is really sad and i suck at grammar so i cant really judge i can relate to this really well written!

Posted 9 Years Ago

You take the human heart into your palm squeeze it into submission until you make the reader feel what you want them to feel. Powerful work. I was struck with grief from your loss, but, still...I would never dare to claim to understand how you feel. Remember the good times.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on May 23, 2011
Last Updated on May 23, 2011


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