Nothing.

Nothing.

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ
"

I wrote this on my arm with a purple Sharpie when I was in the hospital today...

"
Everything
that had
potential
happiness
is dead.

Everything 
we used to 
make this 
dream come
true is gone.

All of the
words we whispered
to each other in
the night never
existed. 

The pure fear
I felt when I 
saw it was true,
died when you
died.

There is nothing
left to hold.

There is nothing
left to cry about.

There are no more
kisses and hugs
and hope.

There is no 
more of 
you. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
I know the grammar is horrible. I don't care.

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This is an excellent poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Amazing poem!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow! this is son intense!!! its a beautiful piece, full of emotion and longing!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


The grammar doesn't matter. I know I read this late, but still hope ur alright!

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is very moving, it's a wonderful masterpiece

Posted 8 Years Ago


Awh ): this is so sad, my grammer is way worse, so no worries. This is pretty. I hope your okay (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


awesome! I love dark! you made dark beautiful. forget the grammer. Its about emotion

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is really sad and i suck at grammar so i cant really judge i can relate to this really well written!

Posted 8 Years Ago


You take the human heart into your palm squeeze it into submission until you make the reader feel what you want them to feel. Powerful work. I was struck with grief from your loss, but, still...I would never dare to claim to understand how you feel. Remember the good times.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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