A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

I wrote this on my arm with a purple Sharpie when I was in the hospital today...

that had
is dead.

we used to 
make this 
dream come
true is gone.

All of the
words we whispered
to each other in
the night never

The pure fear
I felt when I 
saw it was true,
died when you

There is nothing
left to hold.

There is nothing
left to cry about.

There are no more
kisses and hugs
and hope.

There is no 
more of 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ

Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
I know the grammar is horrible. I don't care.

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It's sad. But so full of emotion.
I hope you are okay.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Sometimes we have to place the hope we had stored in another strictly into ourselves, because at least if things go wrong with them, they won't with us, as in meaning, we will still be able to smile with heart at life. Don't give up, because you're closer than you realize to getting there.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like the short lines. They really add to the powerful emotions in this poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful.
Well done. :)
Hope you're OK though.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I love this, it reminds me of my life right now. Great emotion(:

Posted 8 Years Ago

A strong poem with a sad story. I like how you begin with each set of line with hope and ended with sadness. A powerful ending to a excellent poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I hope you are okay..
Great heartfelt poem xx

Posted 8 Years Ago

grammar? need...
the impact of the phrases themselves are worth each word in this poem!
great write!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago

I could see this as more of a "spoken word" piece than a poem
Kind of free-form which I do enjoy. The aggressive flow of emotion and stature throughout.
A very dark write, which as you can tell, is my favourite style
Keep it up and keep sending RR's

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on May 23, 2011
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