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Nothing.

Nothing.

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ
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I wrote this on my arm with a purple Sharpie when I was in the hospital today...

"
Everything
that had
potential
happiness
is dead.

Everything 
we used to 
make this 
dream come
true is gone.

All of the
words we whispered
to each other in
the night never
existed. 

The pure fear
I felt when I 
saw it was true,
died when you
died.

There is nothing
left to hold.

There is nothing
left to cry about.

There are no more
kisses and hugs
and hope.

There is no 
more of 
you. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
I know the grammar is horrible. I don't care.

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Bracing and intellectuality stimulating, well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a great poem. There is a lot of emotion in it. I like that in a poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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TJ
It's a poem...screw grammar

Posted 8 Years Ago


You've got a pretty long arm there, Naomi

Posted 8 Years Ago


alot of talent showing through on this, nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is truely a great piece, heart breaking. Hang in there.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Who cares about grammar? It's irrelevant. All I know is that you're hurting right now and you shouldn't be.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is great, please feel better :(

Posted 8 Years Ago


if it truly comes from your heart, it doesn't matter about the grammar or spelling.

~Lizzard~

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a sad write. It's good to just let your words out..don't care about grammar at the moment..

Posted 8 Years Ago



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