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A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

I wrote this on my arm with a purple Sharpie when I was in the hospital today...

that had
is dead.

we used to 
make this 
dream come
true is gone.

All of the
words we whispered
to each other in
the night never

The pure fear
I felt when I 
saw it was true,
died when you

There is nothing
left to hold.

There is nothing
left to cry about.

There are no more
kisses and hugs
and hope.

There is no 
more of 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ

Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
I know the grammar is horrible. I don't care.

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Bracing and intellectuality stimulating, well done

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is a great poem. There is a lot of emotion in it. I like that in a poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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It's a poem...screw grammar

Posted 8 Years Ago

You've got a pretty long arm there, Naomi

Posted 8 Years Ago

alot of talent showing through on this, nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is truely a great piece, heart breaking. Hang in there.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Who cares about grammar? It's irrelevant. All I know is that you're hurting right now and you shouldn't be.

Posted 8 Years Ago

this is great, please feel better :(

Posted 8 Years Ago

if it truly comes from your heart, it doesn't matter about the grammar or spelling.


Posted 8 Years Ago

This is a sad write. It's good to just let your words out..don't care about grammar at the moment..

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on May 23, 2011
Last Updated on May 23, 2011


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