Living Plastic

Living Plastic

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

  Let me go inside
  your mind for just
  a second, little
  girl.

  I want to see how you
  are and how you
  live in this absurd
  world.

  I would like to swim
  around in a puddle of
  your thoughts.

  And understand why its
  so sweet when you kill
  them all.

  What are you doing?

  How are you living?

  Keep playing pretend.

  Try on dresses, put
 on a new face
  act different every day.

  Keep living plastic.

  Always be the innocent
  one.

  Never let them see how
  you are or they might
  hate you too. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
This is the first poem I have written in a while due to writer's block. Sorry it isn't that good.
(I will find a picture soon by the way)
Thank you for any reviews :)

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Not bad at all! People do pretend to be someone, so the world won't hate them as much as they hate themselves.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a decent poem however the given advice isn't. It is not right to suggest living a lie which is what the persona of the poem is doing. As I said though the poem itself is well done.


Posted 8 Years Ago


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okay so i hate being simple but i shall be what i hate. this is excellent. great message and well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think the words are worth way more than the piture....Awesome way to put it. Love your writing.~

Posted 9 Years Ago


"Living plastic..." A great way of describing it. We melt when we feel the heat, and we twist and conform to meet other people's expectations.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

don't need a picture for this... so here comes a bigger question: What's living for in the first place?

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 10 people found this review constructive.

Half expected to read something about nesting duplicates... (a little bit too much Doctor Who? Never...)
Anyway, I really appreciate the honesty in this poem. It's simple compared to a lot of poetry, and that's perfectly okay. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


7 of 7 people found this review constructive.

Nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 7 people found this review constructive.

Isn't that good! Did you just re read what you wrote cause, Girl, its that great. I love the imagery this brings to my mind, then again I'm a bit more twisted than most so I'm sure its not quite the images you were thinkin bout when you wrote this

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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A very nicely written and portrayed poem. I really liked the honest and true feel to this. Some people are living a plastic reality, but they think they're leading an honest life. A great piece. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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