Elements

Elements

A Poem by Axilya
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Freestyle poetry with visual of text.

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I am the freedom of wind,
The breath that comforts,
The wild dance of fury.
I am the song of nature,
The breath that breathes life,
The unstoppable fury of force.
I am the passion of fire,
The breath that ignites,
The destructive & creative force.
I am the flowing of waves,
The breath of tears,
The tides of the life force.
I am the union of akasha,
The breath of everything,
The lines of a connected force.

I am life.
I am free.
I am unstoppable.
I am passionate.
I am emotions.
Here I am.

© 2008 Axilya


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Great Work. Really nice poem. Thanks for sharing. Keep going.

Posted 15 Years Ago


"wild dance of fury" and "Breath of tears" are two metaphors that made me stop and think! this is a penetrating poem, describing indescribable things with alacrity, well done on this piece!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I liked how you change the font of the different words to truly individualise the emotions and elements. Nicely worded and very nicely conveyed. Thanks for posting it.

(Ps - Off topic, but your artwork is very very nice)

Posted 15 Years Ago


You have described the elements in perfect clarity in this piece. Absolutely beautiful writing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


"I am life.
I am free.
I am unstoppable.
I am passionate.
I am emotions.
Here I am."
That's just really really brilliant and wonderful. I like how bold it is, but at the same time soft and graceful.
Awesome stuff CKx

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Axilya
Axilya

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Currently, I am working on my more major story, Aislinn and Darach. I will try and keep it updated once a month, but it depends upon my creative mojo. I like to dream. more..

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Growing Up. Growing Up.

A Poem by Axilya