As Jim Said...

As Jim said in the past
There used to be a time
When simple things
Used to be enough
There used to be a time
When you can win a heart
With a smile in your face
There used to be a time
When you can build a castle
From the words you trust
There used to be a time
When music can be played
While souls embrace
There used to be a time
When I can see my future
And let go of my past
Jim was nothing but a thought
When I used to believe in love
When I used to believe it could last

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Abdullah Ayyash
January 28th, 2015

Reviews

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Yay!!! I can officially comment on this one! I really like this poem, and I have read it many times. I can say it is one of your best so far!!

[Andy]

Thank you so much!
It means a lot coming from you.

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Welcome very much (I have to behave, so you won't block me:) hehehe