Concupiscence

Concupiscence

Lead me away and astray, into your world. Seduce my little heart with your metaphoric voice and butter-soft lips. I am swimming the sea of yearning and I am searching for you, among madrepores, hippocampuses and sea grass green as my envy. I am fighting for your love together with the whole world. A never ending battle and I am ready to face the greedy, foxy sharks. I shall fight the battle until the end, even if I would end up being shark dinner. 

I will swim around in this sea until I find you. Perhaps you could be my savior from this pandemonium? Among all the other attractive mermaids in your aquarium, I will be the brightest shining star, so you can save me from this sea of malicious surprises and fulfill my desire at last.

 

Reviews

[Gomer LePoet]

You seem to be searching for something/someone. be careful of what you find, there may be more pandemonium in your discovery.

[Anna Lundgren]

Right

[Verser]

Some interesting metaphors, mixed and otherwise. Quite a trip.

[Anna Lundgren]

Thank you