From John

From John

A Poem by writingurl14

If my life was a book

You’d be the best chapter

The best part of all

My happily ever after

In love with you I fall

Every time I think of you

Everything you are and everything you do

Your everything I want, everything I need

I’ll take on anything

To make it forever for you and me

Your smile brings my smile

When you’re with me everyday

And when you’re not

You’re still with me in my thoughts

You have me smiling all the time

Even in my sleep

Because when I close my eyes

You’re there in all my dreams

© 2013 writingurl14


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A beautiful poem. I like the way you led the reader into hopeful and positive thoughts. I like the flow of thoughts and the good ending. Real love make us have reason and purpose for life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writingurl14

6 Years Ago

Both me and the author of this poem (my boyfriend) are glad that you like it! i personally think thi.. read more



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A touching and honest piece. Gently capturing that beautiful unsullied innocence and promise present only at the beginnings of a new relationship. The spring season in the tumultuous cycle that is love. I liked it very much. Well done. 😉

Posted 6 Years Ago


A nice touching little piece there, neatly capturing and encapsulating that freshness and promise we get at the beginnings of a relationship. The spring season of the tumultuous cycle that is love. I liked it very much, well done. 😉

Posted 6 Years Ago


Send this to Hallmark. Seriously. I think they'd buy this, as-is.

Posted 6 Years Ago


writingurl14

6 Years Ago

ya really think?
Douglas White

6 Years Ago

Go read some Hallmark sentimental cards. This is just as good, if not better. Check around, but I do.. read more
"Even in my sleep

Because when I close my eyes

You’re there in all my dreams"

Love that! It's perfectly described and I absolutely think the poems rhythm is perfect! :)

-Dell


Posted 6 Years Ago


The object of this fine poem is one lucky person!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writingurl14

6 Years Ago

Thanks.... :)
this is a truely sweet poem. to love like that is beautiful

Posted 6 Years Ago


writingurl14

6 Years Ago

Thank you... this review means a lot to John and me
A beautiful poem. I like the way you led the reader into hopeful and positive thoughts. I like the flow of thoughts and the good ending. Real love make us have reason and purpose for life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writingurl14

6 Years Ago

Both me and the author of this poem (my boyfriend) are glad that you like it! i personally think thi.. read more
A very romantic poem that really brings back truth and memories. I loved it! :) Pawsome poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writingurl14

6 Years Ago

Thanks. I'm so glad you liked it!
A delightful love poem!

With an easy flow, a pleasing rhyming pattern and conveying a sincere, romantic message, this is a splendid write for sure !



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writingurl14

6 Years Ago

Thank you... My boyfriend wrote this for me and I had to post it! it made me cry when i read it for .. read more
Tom

6 Years Ago

That's sweet !

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writingurl14
writingurl14

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