A Poem by kayla garcia


                                     I THOUGHT YOU WERE THE ONE


I believed you when you said you love me


I believed you when you said you want to be with me


I believed you when you said you cared about me


I believed all that but look it was all lies cause you broke my heart forth hundredth time and of course I was the stupid one to believe you and trust you with my heart and all my secrets.


Baby I thought you were the one I planned on marrying you but look all my plans get washed down the drain cause you don't know what you want.


You said I was the one for you I should never have believed anything you ever told me cause it was all lies and look now I'm the one left here with a broken heart and tears running down my face cause you broke my heart yet one more time and all I can do is cry cause you left me nothing but memories of us and what happened between us.


Baby I loved you and trusted you but you never did nothing to show me you felt the same way so I guess this is good bye cause you left me .


Bye baby i have to let you go it was just yesterday we were in love and running wild with our love and our strengths.


I loved you yet you didn't feel the same way


I trusted you yet you didn't trust me


I believed every word  you said yet you didn't believe anything I said


I still love you but if I take you back again in the end I'm the one thats gonna me getting hurt all over againg I don't know what to do but cry and remince everything about us and what we've did all 8 months we were togeather.


I loved you  I trusted you I put my everything into you I love you and i will always love you

© 2010 kayla garcia

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Hope you find a great Guy know the feeling but doesnt happen to me any more since i am married but i know how this feels. nice write

Posted 9 Years Ago


Posted 9 Years Ago

Oh I could really feel the emotions running so deep in this.. and love is a strange, wonderful and powerful thing. Sometimes we have to lose a great love to find a better one.. I hope whatever happens you find the love of a great guy.. awesome heartfelt writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago

thnx everybody

Posted 9 Years Ago

There are a lot of spelling mistakes and some sentences that don't make sense, but this was really great. I liked it a lot and I can totally relate to it. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago

and I thought I was a romantic.
I'm sorry it didn't work out.
I noticed a lot of your work is about love. This isn't a bad thing, but a little variety wouldn't hurt either. In some cases it takes the mind off the trivial annoyances of loss or heartache.
Probably why I'm so good at writing stories. lol
Great depiction though of giving yourself completely to someone and having it backfire.
Keep it up

Posted 9 Years Ago


Posted 9 Years Ago

i can relate to this one

Posted 9 Years Ago


Posted 9 Years Ago

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