if you only

if you only

A Poem by kayla garcia

IF YOU ONLY ...................

                         If you only loved me

                          If you only wanted me

                          If you only knew me

                           If you only cared about me
 
                      If you only saw what was on the inside
         
                       If you only knew everything about me

                               IF YOU ONLY.........

© 2010 kayla garcia


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This was very wonderfully written.
I loved the ending. It was so beautiful.
Amazing job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


As i read your words i feel
That a person must give the self a chance to get to know
That person soul because truly
Whats counts is whats inside
Awesome piece I do love it!!
Wishing you Peace Love and Light...Yolie

Posted 10 Years Ago


So many if's, so little time!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Its what’s inside that counts, nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


thanx

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is good

Posted 10 Years Ago


kayla .. i guess it would have been better had you changed it a bit

"if only you loved me
if only .... "

i have a work by the name "if only" .. do read it

Posted 10 Years Ago


thanx


Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this leaves room for some hope at the end.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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