if you only

IF YOU ONLY ...................

                         If you only loved me

                          If you only wanted me

                          If you only knew me

                           If you only cared about me
 
                      If you only saw what was on the inside
         
                       If you only knew everything about me

                               IF YOU ONLY.........

Reviews

[Cassandra D.]

This was very wonderfully written.
I loved the ending. It was so beautiful.
Amazing job.

[Morning Star]

As i read your words i feel
That a person must give the self a chance to get to know
That person soul because truly
Whats counts is whats inside
Awesome piece I do love it!!
Wishing you Peace Love and Light...Yolie

[Thomas Philmore Jackson]

So many if's, so little time!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Its what’s inside that counts, nice work.

[kayla garcia]

thanx

[Dupree]

this is good

[the_stoic]

kayla .. i guess it would have been better had you changed it a bit

"if only you loved me
if only .... "

i have a work by the name "if only" .. do read it

[kayla garcia]

thanx

[deeps]

I like this leaves room for some hope at the end.