the perfect moment

the perfect moment

A Poem by malmal412
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I twirl her

she slowly twirls back to me

I pause

And stare

at how the moonlight glimmers of her face,

her smiling face

I wonder to myself

'I'd give anything for this moment to never end'

I twirl her again, but this time a little bit slower

When she comes back to me

I stop

I gently frame her face with my hands

I slowly lean in.....

And whisper " I love you"

Then I softly, but passionately,

kiss the love of my life

And I realize

 

That this is  The perfect moment. . . . . . . .

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 malmal412


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That is the perfect moment, yes. And I found this very sweet. *smile* Thanks for sharing. The twirling part was very cute.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah, great poem.
The tone is so light hearted, yet the emotion is really vivid.
Great choice of words as well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Wow, this is great. I love the subtle imagery that sets such a potent back drop for an outstanding poem. Keep up the great work. Barb

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Nix
Aw, what a lovely read. I absolutely loved the ending... great title (pulled me in), great poem with a great end! ~ Nix

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my full first name is malorie (also pronounced as mallory) lol, i know my name is weird and unique, and so is the spelling lol my nicknames are: mal, malmal, and i have another, but only a few call.. more..

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