Two

Two

A Poem by Ni1408

Sometimes I forget who we are

Then realise what we have become

Though constantly evolving

Beyond any control

Two half hearts

Merging into

one

© 2010 Ni1408


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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

This poem is perfect and it shows that your heart really isn't complete until the right person comes along, and not only changes your life, but changes you as a person! Thank you for sharing that wonderful poem! It was a very enjoyable read! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Not surprised to see all the reads, this poem is like a flower that's burst open silently with a simple premise. Love took over when you weren't looking. Great stuff. You're very good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so true and so well said.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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touching and emotional wrapped up in a few words, no mean feat.well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

This poem is perfect and it shows that your heart really isn't complete until the right person comes along, and not only changes your life, but changes you as a person! Thank you for sharing that wonderful poem! It was a very enjoyable read! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love intimated evocatively-i love this!!!!

james:-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovely

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I just think it's so cool how you got the words to literally take shape on the page. Love the visual, good writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Concise, simple, and incredibly profound. These few words speak about so much, let the reader imagine the situation behind them, create an entire story in their head, based off a few lines. How writing should be. Great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


lovely~evocative unfolding and blending~

Posted 12 Years Ago



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