Chamber

Chamber

A Poem by The_Breakdown

i keep things trapped inside my little chamber
and they will never leave
things i have told no one, and never will
my knowledge lies here
my every action is based on what lies here
my personality
no one is allowed in my chamber
just me
it's the haven i retreat to in hard times
the one i widthdraw into for security
the only thing i can rely on, ive learned, is my little chamber
not people, no
they let you down, no matter how much you trust them
but my chamber keeps all my secrets
never tells, never gossips, never back stabs
its my place
me myself and i
without it, i may go...
insane
wild
nuts
bonkers
i keep things trapped in my little chamber
its mazes and information are quite amazing, if you only saw
everything about me is in here
my fantasies, my dreams, my goals, my darkest secrets
my chamber never tells
my chamber is me
my chamber is forever secret
no one else will ever know
no one else could ever comprehend

© 2013 The_Breakdown


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I enjoyed this work. I liked the format as well as the bold chamber. How you built this chamber into something I can see in my mind is wonderful. Very good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A good write...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


The_Breakdown

7 Years Ago

thank you :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
our chamber is sometimes a place where we keep things we won't even tell ourself. I adore this piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


The_Breakdown

7 Years Ago

thank you so much! i really appreciate the positive feedback, and it's true, our chamber is a place .. read more

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Added on March 19, 2013
Last Updated on March 20, 2013
Tags: weird, strange, interesting, dark, mind, secrets, chamber

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The_Breakdown
The_Breakdown

Rochester, NY



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I love to read and write, although i haven't had much time lately, so i'm just getting back into the world of writing. My stories aren't too good, i have lots of room to improve, but hopefully I'll ge.. more..

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