Blah! Blah! Black Creep!

Blah! Blah! Black Creep!

A Poem by barleygirl
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Momzilla made me do it!

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Blah! Blah! Black Creep!
Do you need some bull?
Yassah! Yassah!
Do fill my mind full!

Gotta stop believing
everything you see
all will be great again
just blindly follow me!

Blah! Blah! Slack Sheep!
Open wide for your spoonful!
Let’s pass around my pisser
and swig a nasty pull!

Look at all the jobs
just because of me!
Two for him! Three for her!
It’s a gig economy!

Blah! Blah! Go to Sleep!
Slumber black steel wool!
Don’t fuss your pretty heads
over greedy pockets full!

© 2019 barleygirl


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Well done, Bgirl. Your nursery rhyme is excellent...I do question that first line...because if I don't some other less enlightened individual will certainly ask about 'black creep'...now I know the intent wasn't racist
but to signify the colour of some souls and, I presume, the one in the white house, but the world has gone PC nuts.
Keep it up friend. Our job is to make people think and if we offend...TFB.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

My intent was for that to sound racist, much like the airwaves are clogged with these days here! I k.. read more


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great little poem, you're don't f**k with me style is a joy, someone pissed you off somewhere down the line, I kinda like this side of you, wary hugs coming at ya,

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Days Ago

Born on July 4 (independence day), it was my dad's first day off in weeks (I was 9th & last kid). We.. read more
Ha! Ah, the satire smells sweet. I am reading the poem in old DT's voice, I can't help it.

Love the play on the classic and how it can so effortlessly become something to suit the current (awful) reality. You've adapted the scenario so well to suit this style it feels natural. And it's a fitting medium.

Great work, Margie.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Days Ago

Since I live in an agricultural area, I end up with half my friends being Trump supporters, that's w.. read more
Beautiful rhymes here, Margie.
Love its style and composition.
It sounds like the little nursery rhymes.

Beautiful written.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Days Ago

Thank you for stopping by to read my latest silly outburst! *wink! wink!* Fondly Margie
Scathing, tightrope walking work Chris...admirable...

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Days Ago

Usually I steer clear of political writing, but sometimes a black nursery rhyme provokes black think.. read more
I really liked that remake of urs on the classic ba ba black sleep. That was very creative and fun to read. Great wordplay, rhyme scheme and flow. Loved it

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Days Ago

Thank you for being so big-hearted as to humor me when I'm being offensive to 35% of this country's .. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Hours Ago

Haha always welcome :p
There's nothing like a nursery rhyme and it's musicality to make a point stick. I like your Blah blah black creep. A political poem no doubt and with the shenanigans going on here at the moment maybe I should do the same Margie. All the best.

Chris

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

5 Days Ago

Never having kids, nursery rhymes do not come off my brain easily. Also, living in redneck territory.. read more
I like a poem that makes one think that has a hidden meaning or maybe not with comedy in it this one was cute clever happy funny and all of the above

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

5 Days Ago

The hidden meaning I'm afraid might be missed: I only used "black" becuz that's part of the nursery .. read more
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

5 Days Ago

No I wasn’t referring to black just meant I love poems with hidden meanings x
Well I have it on good authority that this is fake news. 😀
""If I don't think it, its not real.
Now, if you don't mind, I have important tweets to twit. Someone just called me a cotton candy headed oompah loompah. I love using that dronestrike game." 😀


Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

5 Days Ago

Your first line made gave me such a belly laugh, I almost started coughing! I love your sense of hum.. read more
Lorry

5 Days Ago

The nurses keep me well medicated here Margie.... And a bed on permanent standby for the Trumpet one.. read more
Ive been gone for a bit but you never lose that pizazz!

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

5 Days Ago

Always happy to see you drop in! I seem to be on a jag lately . . . it's been such a gorgeous & mild.. read more
I've been busy, took a break and checked in and read this, first thing. Something tells me I need to tune in to the news! Never watched and read the news in my life as much as I have these past three years. I think it's because I never felt I had to worry as much as I do now.

As I read your words here, the sun was literally shadowed by a storm cloud and my room went dark. My most favorite lines here: all will be great again, just blindly follow me. NEVER

Love how you matched this all up.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

5 Days Ago

Being sick of such crap, I stopped paying crazy-high price for dumb channeling on my satellite TV a .. read more
Rhayne

5 Days Ago

There's a piece that Archangel Gabriel wrote titled 'Evil Response' that described incredibly accura.. read more
barleygirl

5 Days Ago

Thank you so much for this excellent heads up. I had not read Archangel Gabriel before & it's great .. read more

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