Pardon My Crave

Pardon My Crave

A Poem by barleygirl
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silly sexy scrambles . . .

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Hope you don’t mind
just rack your back a bit
while I scribble and nibble
lingering along your jawbone
soft snaky slithers
my jaunt will be so frothy
you won’t feel a thing
give me a moment
to gulp your ginger tarns
knock back a nip
coy harmony with
my gray troubadour
hope you don’t mind if
I decant my daydreams
drip by drip
would you mind
my tongue tangling
your secret furry shroud
long-hidden hankering
behold threadbare denim
embracing bright bundle
swizzle sticks for thighs
stirring my frazzle
creamy lemon drizzles
stroking skin dazzles
a splash of audacity
piques our pining
right here . . . do partake
clammy sloshing carafes
pouring a decadent potion
gradual gyrations meld
squirm . . . slide . . . suck
you won’t feel a thing
give me a moment
intractable veil blocks
bumping against it
plummeting . . . grasping
gasping . . . oh yeah . . .
I’m on the other side.

© 2019 barleygirl


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A typically lively bit of nostalgia, re-living through the poet/artist's eyes moments of desire and fantasy that splatter into what's left of the brains of some of us. I like the anti-romantic realism of 'threadbare denim' and 'swizzle sticks for thighs'. The verbal pyrotechnics create a display of sensations that might have been or perhaps once were before the troubadours were gray and the veil of tears obscured the view - from the other side. Your poetry is a jacuzzi of words...never still, always stimulating, sensational..

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

I've been a scampering vamp lately . . . I'm sure to get kinky as Halloween approaches *smile*
Jibey

9 Months Ago

Need a broomstick? 😁
barleygirl

9 Months Ago

I'm more into cauldrons. All my virtual vamp-scamps spent broiling boobies over a deep putrid cauldr.. read more



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Spicy erotic suggestive lines, mixing food/hunger with spicy, sensual movements!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

8 Months Ago

I've been on such a long slimy Halloween bender, I almost forgot I used to do sensual writing now & .. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

8 Months Ago

Yes they are normal so enjoy Margie!
lol,made me hungry for love,,nah for food

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

8 Months Ago

Thanks for stopping by & kidding with me . . . I already forgot about writing this, so it's good to .. read more
 wordman

8 Months Ago

well margie you`re welcome
You are such a fun and talented writer. I think it is so nifty how you portray such a strong feeling with a dance of adjectives without being blunt or clear about the topic. It is like when you watch an orange squeeze juice or see a curd donut but are not sure why you're turned on.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

If you'll excuse me for going "technical" about it . . . I believe that so many different things tur.. read more
Ah, Bgirl, you are an old witch ... and the words you have laid down here are rather hot and I'm bothered, but being a "gray troubadour" I sometimes have trouble stirring drinks with my gold-plated "swizzle stick".
You have written a delightfully seductive poem that makes my "ginger tarns" tingle. My oh my ... gotta go now.

Well done.




Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

It's just been too damn long since I've ravished the male form . . . doing it in poetry just doesn't.. read more
Oh my you do know how to make this white Anglo Saxon pale face blush a few tones to the red! gulp... there is no loss of shizzle to your nizzle Miss Margie LOL I think you just channeled your inner snoop dog and I think he may want your poem for one of his songs:) sometimes when you write stuff i find myself speechless and well this is one of those writes

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

STOP! Stay right there . . . hold still . . . I'll be right over to ravish you while you're still in.. read more
Oh I love the word play... it is so lustfully decadent.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

I need to get off this horny kick so I can get back to my gory Halloween scribbles! Thanks for stopp.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Months Ago

Nothing wrong with a little Horny kick.
Course you could combine horny and halloween.
barleygirl

9 Months Ago

You just gave me an idea! *bing!*
Like a scrambled game ready to be puzzled by a curious mind, so are craves that could go beyond border.

Well written, Margie.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

My craves go way beyond the border all the time, but I try to keep things in my mind, only words upo.. read more
Rowrrrr....thats a spicy tangle of slippery imagery and pungent overtones. In true barley girl style you take the internal thought and make it grandly external just like it should be. Wonderfully fun and uninhibited....loved it a alot.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

I have a bit of an issue regulating the raging hornies that have seized me since I started toking he.. read more
Leave you for a week and you're banging about in the outdoors.
Is there no laws in California regarding outdoor pursuits.
Plus, when did it become Autumn, have I been sleeping.
Was wondering why the old bat next door was looking witchy.
Like how, thighs, frazzle, drizzle and dazzle spell out horny climb up my castle.
Get back on the broom, vamping season is in season.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

September is harvest season here in California where we are enjoying our second year of recreational.. read more
Paul Bell

9 Months Ago

You should tap the water over there and send it to me. Legality here is the pusher in the bar. We'll.. read more
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DAH
"do partake
clammy sloshing carafes
pouring a decadent potion
gradual gyrations meld
squirm . . . slide . . . suck" __ this says it all for me: whew!

A moist write!
DAH

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

"Whew!" is a completely delightful response! I'll take it! *wink! wink!* Thanks for sharing & smirki.. read more
DAH

9 Months Ago

My pleasure!

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