haiku (granny moon bares all)

haiku (granny moon bares all)

A Poem by barleygirl
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november twelfth . . .

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granny moon bares all
watch for her exhibition
flaunting her beaver

woodland nymphs emerge
to sip on beaver moonbeams
womanly wiles surge

momma beaver preens
hideaway stocked with aspen
kits cozy inside

moonlit mermaids romp
fizzy with effervescence
tangled in strewn kelp

mother earth rises
pesters her persecutors
payback is a b***h

© 2019 barleygirl


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Dam.. just as ya thought it was safe to go back into the water.. ya surrounded by beavers and between you and me, they are perfectly formed & rarin to go .. a whole heap, a quintet of em all in a row... Heavenly bodies each one Margie (PELTs) fondly N :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

I have no idea why, but this made me burst out laughing & howling like a maniac! I was picturing a q.. read more
Neville

2 Weeks Ago


mat'll do nicely, piles of NUGs back at ya :)



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well done says i...brilliant .. your haiku spills sensual fun and womanly teasings .. closing gives me a jolt ...after her beaver .. nymphs and mermaids ... i am suddenly threatened by Mother herself!!! wonderful read for me dahlink! :)))))))))))))))))) hmmmmmm flaunts her beaver eh!? i guess that may be the origination of the saying "drink in the moon" .... actually .. that's not a saying ... i made it up ... but it works ..right?!
E.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

The last two evenings, I've spied the very beginning crescent (leading to beaver moon) hanging lazil.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

ahahahaha i love it too hon! my embrace of the moon will be forever altered ;)))))))))))))))))))))
There is a great difference between the elderly nude and the young in their perfection lol.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for stopping by with words of wisdom. I think old-age nudity needs to be one-on-one (not p.. read more
you've covered all the bases - manhood and now womanhood. if you've got it, might as well flaunt it - age and location and manner no matter. i wonder about the origin of calling it a "beaver"? playfully amusing. punchy ending. i hope granny moon knows how to build a dam ... :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Pete

2 Weeks Ago

i definitely picked up on the femininity - frolicking naked in nature like a nymph. so, is native a.. read more
barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

In my research, I was so overwhelmed with options (as to the etymology of "beaver" as c**t) . . . I'.. read more
Pete

2 Weeks Ago

i wouldn't ... :)
I am filled with great joy at the thought of ol' grannys beaver, is it available on Netflix, as an old c**t myself kind finds kind, haha hugs fondly,

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for stopping by to let me in on your looney lunar insights! I can't say I've pondered any .. read more
I never miss a barley poem even if it scares me a little these beavers are taking over my mind and I'm not ashamed to say they are a bit intimidating what is a bunny to do but dash into his warren and let mother nature give her payback and hope his home doesn't get flooded:)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

Suddenly I have clarity! Bunny has an aversion to beavers! Why didn't I figure that out? *wink! wink.. read more
I always admire people who nail Haikus so perfectly. This is good

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for your enthusiasm! I've lately fallen in love with this form again! (((HUGS))) F.. read more
Cassie

2 Weeks Ago

Hugs received, I feel them already
yes, payback is a b***h....and this group of haiku is quite fun...separate, each stands alone, but together they have as much power as the strongest moonbeams....
j.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for stopping by to dance under the beaver moon with me! *smile* Fondly, Margie
Puts a whole new meaning on being mooned.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for stopping by for a little beaver moon magic! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Midnight, moonlight naughtiness for the old folks! Ha! And such creativity and wit, weaving five haikus into one poem. Brilliant and funny!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

Let me see now . . . what exactly gives this poem that "old folks" feel to you? *wink! wink!* Could .. read more
Ha ha Margie. You've put a smile on my face with this one. A clever little write and in haiku format too. That granny moon, what a exhibitionist she is. Thanks for the middle of the night entertainment.

Chris

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

Now I wish I'd somehow worked in the word "exhibitionist"! Five syllables! Thanks for humoring me wh.. read more

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