Touché, Bad Bunny

Touché, Bad Bunny

A Poem by barleygirl
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dueling poems . . . against "Coffin Nail Clutch"

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Awash in his brooding reverie
a radiance rally so feathery
with props unfussy as can be
nicotine smolders a trajectory
imprints an infinite memory
curiosity echoes upon his coffee
at his muse-enthused potpourri
the uninvited guest is brevity.

An array to sate his fluent need
virtuosity oozes a slow drip feed
cajoling each covert salty seed
grunt a line then gouge and bleed
his specs decline one more reread
the implements of a dying breed
this sad scene is missing kickass weed
how could anyone do a riotous screed?

Relax ole boy, there no need to grieve
got a bundle of fresh bud up my sleeve
let’s give your miserly muse a heave
let’s plug you in and make you believe
your fertile noodle is boiling to conceive
oh! all the tapestries you will weave
when writing is not a brawl to bereave
when the cerebral way takes a leave.

© 2019 barleygirl


Author's Note

barleygirl
Robert Trakofler (bad bunny) took this fine photo (which I love)
of his writing life . . . I love his poem, but he insisted I also write
a poem from his photo!

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so far it is a peaceful battle of wit and improper poetry ....ha ha...
i think Margie has inched ahead , bunny....the cerebral way is waiting for response from you.
the pen is in your court now. so to speak.

Margie...i love "miserly muse"--now them's fightin' words...

j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

I started this poem thinking about how I would love to smell the tobacco on his breath, taste the co.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

He he I think I would love Jacob to write this photograph too:)
barleygirl

1 Week Ago

I agree, that would be good to see! . . . but then again, you two would be ganging up on me! *wink! .. read more



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Wow this read like rap music fast and furious but better than rap!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

This is an amazing concept . . . since I feel pretty sluggish most of my days . . . and I've never l.. read more
Just great. Now, I have to read another poem. Time for a copy and paste review!
Kidding! Nice to see your rhyming style again!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Let's see, in the last two weeks, I've written two poems in a row about flies, two in a row about di.. read more
Jon Roggie

1 Week Ago

You work with what you got.
barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Now THAT'S hilarious!
I read this three times, then even a fourth because I fell in love with some of these lines-viruosity oozes a slow drip feed,grunt a line, then gouge and bleed, miserly muse(oh yes), the tapestries you will weave-
all excellent word choices. A pleasure to read.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Your review really makes my day! It sounds like you picked up on the very creations I labored to cra.. read more
dear Margie... I get the drift... and nice to know who is a
medicine man and/or woman. Indeed things that grow naturally
in the earth can either help or hurt. When the day comes that
I hurt really bad. I will get my medicine from the Earth.
You "guys" are quite the Connoisseur of words. truly, Pat

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Thank you for your finely-nuanced review! *wink! wink!* I spent 10 yrs transitioning from the typica.. read more
Oh my! Reading this makes me feel as if I've eaten far too much cotton candy. I think I should write a poem - A Day At The Fair With Bunny And Barley. :-)

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Linda Marie Van Tassell

1 Week Ago

LOL! That's not the way that I meant it. I was referencing the way one feels after eating too much.. read more
barleygirl

1 Week Ago

*wink! wink!* always love your spirited responses!
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

Hmm a day at the fair with you two would be a blast:)
I must explain that I must abstain from the psychotropic gains... given my naturally messy brain when those two meet asides from all the things I would eat it will get locked in repeat and the page will defeat unless of course you like to read about my neat feet:)

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

As a young stoner, the munchies DEFINED my stonerhood. I quit for 40 years & was afraid to try it fo.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

I love an edible once in a while but I couldn’t even write my name when I’m stoned:)
there is so much in the way of licensed poetic terminology in both of your writes that I have great difficulty trying to keep up with it all
A very impressive display of terminology

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

He's listed as Calzonetti or some long-a*s name I can't remember. Sinister potato is another name fo.. read more
Dave Brown

1 Week Ago

Haha, that's funny because it is quite often your reviews that I take my hint from
Thanks for.. read more
barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Part of the reason I write my reviews the way I do is to help others thru the struggle I'm usually f.. read more
so far it is a peaceful battle of wit and improper poetry ....ha ha...
i think Margie has inched ahead , bunny....the cerebral way is waiting for response from you.
the pen is in your court now. so to speak.

Margie...i love "miserly muse"--now them's fightin' words...

j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

I started this poem thinking about how I would love to smell the tobacco on his breath, taste the co.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

He he I think I would love Jacob to write this photograph too:)
barleygirl

1 Week Ago

I agree, that would be good to see! . . . but then again, you two would be ganging up on me! *wink! .. read more
This is funny since I read both your poems, I love the back and forth. Keep on being awesome!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

I think this duel will go no further becuz the bunny is off on new tangents already. He sent me a vi.. read more

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barleygirl

Central Coast, CA



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