Fellowship Flowing

Fellowship Flowing

A Poem by barleygirl
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inspired by photo, photographer unknown . . .

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moon and river tryst
pussywillows twinkletoe
and tulles tango

gurgle gathering
moonbeams on a river stroll
evening escapade

lunar rendezvous
reminiscent reflections
waterway welcome

rippled and moonlit
river rallies ricochet
charming rapscallion

moon moans: unity
bullfrog concurs with a croak
fellowship flowing

© 2021 barleygirl


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' lunar rendezvous ~ reminiscent reflections ~ waterway welcome ..

There's something magical about the way the moon lays its spirit pon water.. moving as the breeze might decide.. of trembling merely in just being there.. where.. anything can happen. It's an unknown.. a meeting of flight above and flow beneath.. and so very beautiful. As is your poem, dear friend.. truly beautiful,,

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Thank you for visiting my poem & leaving your softly flowing words. I'm eager to get back to poetry .. read more
emmajoy

1 Week Ago

Those six last lines both touch and smile me!

Although energised by reaching so f.. read more


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Beautiful poem. Each line is catching. Also I am really attracted to the photo below. I love sitting alone these days under such environment.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Usually, we humans see a photo like this as us looking at it, but instead I wanted to take me & my v.. read more
I so love the moon and the night. There is nothing better than a moonlit encounter with someone you love or at least this poem makes me think of that.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Thank you for such a romantic interpretation & for sharing my poem (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
dear Margie... I love each verse of your poem... especially the tulles tango...
however, all your lines have me blinking and thinking that you are quite the
Artist of words. Love both of the photos of the "Moon and River tryst"... T
his poem is a Keeper for me. I may write your poem and frame it
next to an "oil painting" I may create of the tryst of the Moon and River.
Your poem reminds me of the song... "Moon River... I'm crossing you in Style".
tenderly, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

My dad played piano well & often, Moon River was one he played a lot & I would sing along in my pre-.. read more
This poem was truly awe-inspiring, Miss Margie! As always, I love the broad use of vocabulary you used in this!!! The imagery was so peaceful...like a wave of calm taking over my senses reading this. Thank you for sharing such peaceful poetry :)

10000000000/100

Nix ❤️️

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Love your enthusiasm & thanks for stopping to spread somma your bright spirits around! (((HUGS))) Fo.. read more
This one is full of images all contributing to the theme of harmony. Liked especially the part about the frog croaking concurrence to the moon. I used to live by a small lake where the frogs used to raise a racket on warm nights. Don't think the moon was the reason for their songs, though. Lady frogs would be my guess.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Beautiful share & thanks so much for stopping by to brighten my day! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Nature with all
Its inhabitants
flowing together
in perfect harmony
oh that it were that
easy for humans
love these haiku
sets such a nice
joyful write with
fine alliteration
throughout

Posted 1 Month Ago


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barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Your words flow onto the page like the moonlight sparkles across this river! Thanks for flowing alon.. read more
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a stunning Haiku set, of how creatures of nature adapt to each other. I love "moon and river tryst"...and "fellowship flowing" just shows us the bond that is formed among them; your words are always dramatic and eventful. Humans should get along that well!!
Amazing!!
Best always, Bet + hugs

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Sometimes when I read your poetry about nature, I've noticed that you inject yourself into the story.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

Thanks for reading and it's true!


i'm about to put up chp 11 cool joe, you ne.. read more
I've always thought this but your vocabulary is smart and entertaining. High level poet.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

This means a bunch, coming from you! Thanks for the treat (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
This a lovely flow of rhyme and rhythm Margie. The image of the moon above the water has triggered a cascade of nature's images all flowing along in your inimitable style. I like the bullfrog line as if he is commenting too. Fellowship flowing is a nice conclusion and suggests as you often do a oneness with nature.
We are having a hard wintry spell here and I'm just recovering from a slow snow run up our local hill with a fun bum slide back down.
Cheers,
Alan

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind & complimentary words! I notice it's a bit snowy in your neck of the woods, .. read more
What a picture you paint. So easily I could see myself sitting on a dock or riverbank and take in all the beauty you describe. The quiet lapping of the water against the dock combined with the chorus of frogs. Thank you for this, my little vacation.
Take care - Dave

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Months Ago

When I saw this photo, trying to conjure up something romantic, I saw the moon and the river being i.. read more

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