My confession...

My confession...

A Poem by barricade
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sometimes...words are just taken as mere words...

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Is it possible
for a heart that's broken
to love another
after being forsaken

Is it possible
for one who is damaged
to love the one
who herself was challenged

What happens
when both are guarded
one's walls break down
and the other still deserted

What happens when
collide two such worlds
can they unite
through mere actions or words

Once again in life,
I'm reaching someone with an outstretched hand...
there is something only I see in you
and it connects us with an elusive strand

For me it is a tightrope
as either way I can fall
my past shut the door on me
and even you may not answer my call

I'm willing to risk my existence for you
my destiny, my heart, my soul
if only you could hold my hand
two broken may be one whole...

© 2013 barricade


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Sometimes it is hard to love again after being hurt, but it just takes time to heal. One moment you are sad and broken but then one day you will find that you are happy about moving forward and going on with your life and finding someone new.

Good Job

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

10 Years Ago

thankyou for the kind review PK :)
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

10 Years Ago

You're Welcome



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It's awesome, amazing and wonderful =}

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice flow. Good content. A solid write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
wow..!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Sometimes it is hard to love again after being hurt, but it just takes time to heal. One moment you are sad and broken but then one day you will find that you are happy about moving forward and going on with your life and finding someone new.

Good Job

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

10 Years Ago

thankyou for the kind review PK :)
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

10 Years Ago

You're Welcome
Beautiful wording, a very expressive piece. i enjoyed reading, nice job

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

10 Years Ago

thankyou :) im glad you liked it:)
chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

anytime
Excellent ending "two broken may be one whole." I like that potential. Yes, it is possible. It takes much time and patience though. Love surely does cover a multitude of sin. Lovely write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

10 Years Ago

Thankyou so much for your ever so kind review dear... I'm so glad you liked it :)
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. It is encouraging to know that despite a past issue, the heart is ready to risk everything, the very existence, for the bounty of love. Very well penned. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

10 Years Ago

Thankyou for taking out the time to read... I'm glad you liked it :)

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