Dilemma : A tryst with my twisted fate

Ever since I saw you,
I've been restless,
wreckless
and insane...

You make me wanna know you,
Talk,
be close
and break this taboo...

But my craziness makes each effort seem vain...

Like a deep déjà vu,
You stir up my deep dark soul.
Emotions that I once had
Fell flat and burnt my core...

I see them resurface,
for you once again.
The madness that I once had
is haunting my being with pain...

What is that I feel?
Is it love...
Is this real?

Am I crazy about you
Or am I just escaping my past
And this, is just a way through?

Amidst all that's blue,
you still seem like my light,
at the end of the tunnel,
true...

Amidst all my hate,
you still make me wanna jump
and take a leap of faith.

Yet another tryst with my twisted fate...

Reviews

[Brett Moore]

Man, I have been there.. and you nailed it. Where this took me, the moment you described, is absolutely the most nerve racking and thrilling feeling i have ever experienced. Where it seems like love but I'm questioning my motivations. The best thing we can do is capture a moment in a bottle, play it out on paper and hope those who read can feel what we feel. You did well here. Great job!

[barricade]

Thanks a tonne mate...I'm glad my work is to your liking :)

[FateDictates]

wow slam dunk...
"Yet another tryst with my twisted fate..."
beautiful ink, hope there is alot more where this came from, may you always have a muse..lol

[A. H. Pinley]

Am I crazy about you
Or am I just escaping my past
And this, is just a way through?

(Am I crazy about you
Or am I just escaping my past
Or is this just a way through?)

[chaotic katie]

Nicely penned! i enjoyed reading

[barricade]

I'm glad you liked it :)

[kanika pahuja]

o wow..!!
M speechless..!!

[barricade]

thank you for reading :)