My "Beautiful Stranger"

My "Beautiful Stranger"

A Poem by barricade
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just a little tribute to a dear friend....Krystle...

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I have never ever seen her...
yet she's on my mind; a stranger...
a girl named krystle...
just like her name; so subtle...
its ironical; i feel with her a connection so strong...
as if I've known her forever or even long...
we've never met, we're worlds apart...
yet there's a bonding; straight from the heart...
I've found a sweet friend in her...
I'll give all i can to make her stronger...
she's been through a lot; the hurt and pain...
the tests she's faced, won't go in vain...
she deserves the best and even more...
my prayers for her will make that sure...
don't know what she feels about me...
but i shall always be there by thee...
we might never ever meet unless it's a rebirth or a world re-arranger...
but she will always be my friend KRYSTLE; a BEAUTIFUL STRANGER!!!!

© 2009 barricade


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Is this poem based on a cyber-connection?

It shows a steady grace, and even a hint of the eeriness of the virtual. More people these days form "best friend" and "love" bonds with people they have yet to meet in the flesh, including yours truly. Puts a different spin on "Brave New World."

"My Beautiful Stranger" is a good, universally resonant title in, as I say, this age of virtuality. You've oriented your heart in a good place for the unpredictability of such relatedness.

Good work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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ive re-read this poem and ive realized we havent talked in almost a year..how are u? once again i love this poem a copy of it is hanging on my wall next to my bed! lovely ♥much love krystle♥

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

another beautiful work of art...very talented and creative, and of course full of emotion

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful. We can't help who we connect with, or where that connection happens, be it in person or the Internet. Lovely and touching.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful piece. I have always felt that the greatest appreciation for someone is to capture their essence in words. It shows them who they are to you and that poem lasts a lifetime. I have had friend write one for me and I almost cried.


Great piece

Live, Love and Learn
Lady V

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmm...I like this one! I think some of the strongest connections are made through the internet. ^^ This is lovely!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe! This is so sweet and so beuatiful. I like this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

o my so beautful and u know how i feel i wrote in love with a stranger for you my friend thank you for baseing such a lovly poem on me..........much love,krystle

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hey
It's a great poem,
I think it is very well written. Its very morish :P
I think it is very very great :D
Please for all of us keep writing�
Thanks from [x] theUnknown [x]


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loving the feeling of a love that is reaching beyond time and space..
A beautiful and thought provoking piece...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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