My fantasy...

My fantasy...

A Poem by barricade
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just a little " something" expressing my feelings for the "night"...the time i love the most...

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sitting by the window...
the night it weaves a dream...
casting a spell upon me...
enchanted, i flow along a stream...

i leave the room, bedazzled...
walk out all alone...
not knowing why i do so..
just spell bound by the unknown...

bare feet as i step out...
am greeted by the cold...
the magic has just begun...
mysteries, they unfold...

the moon shining bright...
amongst the zillion stars...
the sky, a dark shade of violet...
the clouds forming a veil, like one; of the czars...

the view; picturesque...
a living fantasy for sure...
nature playing a song...
the music ever so pure...

the wind it quickly wraps me...
in a strong embrace...
sensuously whispers in my ears...
and gently caresses my face...

i stand on my toes to reach out to thee...
and open my arms as wide...
to feel the eternal bliss...
giving me a million rushes, with each rising tide...

nature at its playful best...
teasing me to delight...
my fantasies they grow...
as i make love to the night!!!






© 2009 barricade


Author's Note

barricade
wouldn't have written this one if it wasn't for a dear friend...this ones for her...
still not complete though (maybe) (think i can write more...have lots to say on this...lets see)

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Beautiful beautiful! I love nature and the night as well and this was so flowing and whimsical, I found myself being caressed by the breeze. This is a fantastic poem. You should be proud :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a wonderful and amazing write
full of gripping emotion and beuatiful as well.

the wind it quickly wraps me...
in a strong embrace...
sensuously whispers in my ears...
and gently caresses my face...

I love these lines here. I can feel every
word you have penned from your heart.
Keep up the wonderful writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is delightful. What a true gem, beautiful! It truly captures the essence of the sublime evening hours.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tell us more about your dear friend xxx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great and lovely write!

"the moon shining bright...
amongst the zillion stars...
the sky, a dark shade of violet...
the clouds forming a veil, like one; of the czars... "

All of your word choices here were positively superb.

-Luna

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it ...great write and well written

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the images you conjure up by using all five senses. Fantasy is a sense, right? Well, at least it is for me. lol Enjoyable read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i luv your poem! i do this too sometimes, it'll be like 11:55 and i'm takin' a walk outside :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good write


xxx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it says so much about your dear friend without even stating it was for her ur gifted my friend you truely are and who ever this is 4 im positive she loves it♥♥♥:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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