My fantasy...

My fantasy...

A Poem by barricade
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just a little " something" expressing my feelings for the "night"...the time i love the most...

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sitting by the window...
the night it weaves a dream...
casting a spell upon me...
enchanted, i flow along a stream...

i leave the room, bedazzled...
walk out all alone...
not knowing why i do so..
just spell bound by the unknown...

bare feet as i step out...
am greeted by the cold...
the magic has just begun...
mysteries, they unfold...

the moon shining bright...
amongst the zillion stars...
the sky, a dark shade of violet...
the clouds forming a veil, like one; of the czars...

the view; picturesque...
a living fantasy for sure...
nature playing a song...
the music ever so pure...

the wind it quickly wraps me...
in a strong embrace...
sensuously whispers in my ears...
and gently caresses my face...

i stand on my toes to reach out to thee...
and open my arms as wide...
to feel the eternal bliss...
giving me a million rushes, with each rising tide...

nature at its playful best...
teasing me to delight...
my fantasies they grow...
as i make love to the night!!!






© 2009 barricade


Author's Note

barricade
wouldn't have written this one if it wasn't for a dear friend...this ones for her...
still not complete though (maybe) (think i can write more...have lots to say on this...lets see)

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Your rhyme was perfect but the line.....
"the clouds forming a veil, like one; of the czars... "
Didn't quite fit??? Maybe it was just me???

The rest was perfect. Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

nature at its playful best...
teasing me to delight...


Undoubtedly, I love night and darkness...Nature plays its role of that enigma at night, which I love the most...
I loved this piece of writing, the imagery in just beautiful :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wow!!! night is the best part of the day..... i m a night person too and really enjoyed this piece.... i agree when you say
"nature at its playful best..."
very well written dear!
good choice of words........

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is brilliant.. such a great tribute with such fierce flow to the night.. the stars.. speaking of true love of all that represents night.. this is great.. loved all of it but especially:

the moon shining bright...
amongst the zillion stars...
the sky, a dark shade of violet...
the clouds forming a veil, like one; of the czars...

yes it is so nice at night when the clouds are not covering the stars and moon.. I am putting this one to my favorites to remind myself that night can be a beautiful thing!!! Thank you for giving light to my night!!! =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is wonderful :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You did a wonderful job...like the flow and everything...i really liked how you decribed the night
Great job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

WoW very very nice indeed !!!
A wonderful poem ...
Everything perfect ...
Very descriptive and perfectly understandable !!!

"nature at its playful best...
teasing me to delight...
my fantasies they grow...
as i make love to the night!!!"

Awesome !!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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