Change!!!

changes are an inevitable part of one's life...but some changes can be devastating!!!!

They say Time and Tide wait for none,
as the sands of time flow,
changes do come...
This is the story of my life, my love...
Its traces all wiped away,
just scrapes and bruises left above...
She left me all alone when I needed her the most,
how quickly she did change and all we had was lost...!!!

Author's Note

some thoughts...

Reviews

[Ignorance Was Bliss Eve..]

I think in such ways.
I can tell you how so I relate.
Maybe, someday.

[lost inside]

I can feel the hurt in this.
Th epain just screams out.
Well release of emotion.

[Jason]

Truthful and heartfelt work of art. I love how you incorporated love loss and change together...., Such truth and power to these words..."They say Time and Tide wait for none...
and as the sands of time flow, changes do come... "

I really like what you have created here. It's truly brilliant.

Jay

[Stephanie]

It sucks when someone you depend on just up and leaves. It changes your whole world, or so it seems. I could feel the heartbreak and despair in this, and here's a big virtual (((((((((HUG)))))))). As my friend likes to say:

"Time heals all wounds, but some wounds leave scars."

Great job :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

There seems to be a balance between good and bad... the only thing i figure are bad things happen so we appreciate the good... very well exprssion of pain and heartache.

[Shadow of Sunshine]

Again...Amazing work XD

[deeps]

I can feel the hurt and the pain you present here.
I like how you write. You write from your heart and soul
That makes you quite a poet. Like what you have bled out here.

[Fredrick Malkyor]

Dear Barricade,

I see that wrote about the pain and dark side of love, a common topic to most poets. I find it beautiful how so little words can mean alot for poems. Then again, six lines can become a thousand needles to the heart. Your making excellent progress in my book. I wish for you to keep up the good work.

Your Friend,

Fredrick Malkyor

[♡Moon Child♡..]

That was different. It really does seem like you're moving on. ^^ Good lock, love.