Where love is war....

No matter what you do or say

things are gonna be my way...

 

 

It's your EGO versus my LOVE they say!!!!

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Great short write full of confidence.. Ego versus Love.. and love can be such a trifling war..

There are no true rules .. whereby love is war.. let pride fall away.. so passions can soar..


Although clearly you can see your ego as well coming out in this fiery write.. as things are gonna be your way.. surely shows that ego as well.. Egos can be the death of romance with deep pitted pride.. if the white flags do not come out at some point!!! Thank you so much for sharing!!! Interested to see where the above is going to! =)

[funeralmoon]

i love the title.. yess with love is war and isnt that just funn. good write

[Ayesha Atif]

Few words, they give out a loud message.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I love when someone .. can take so few words and give them meaning and power .. well done ...a poem does not have to be long and some are better if the writer does not become trapped with too many .. very good

[RaindropsRoses93]

short, enlightened, and all to true. the true test of love is being able to put your ego aside for the good of the relationship. another great piece, keep up the great work.

[Stephanie]

Hmm, really interesting. Makes me think..... Too many people involve their egos in a relationship, putting themselves always first...when relationships are equally give and take. Out of love. Really awesome :]