These eyes of mine...

These eyes of mine...

A Poem by barricade

You see these eyes

and within you see,

someone with whom

she'll never be....


My words don't mean anything to her

nor do my pleas to reunite...

And the flame that there once was,

she just won't reignite...


These eyes of mine

were once a reflection,

of love, friendship

and pure affection...


Now all she sees in them is oblivion...

She feels I'm numb and cold!!!

I'm driven by ego and my temper bold!!!


But I beg again...I do beg to differ...

Something that's ever so prominent,

she just fails to decipher...


Despite of my heart's downpour

and the love for her that still overflows...

It's still unconditional and irrevocable...

But her harshness still renders us unable!!!


My love she fails to see,

words she just ignores...

I'm knocking incessantly on her heart,

but locked she has the doors!!!


She doesn't wanna see me ever now,

just doesn't wanna hear from me...

She pleads me to move on,

But that can never be!!!


If the one above really is,

And my love for her is true.

Then someday, I'm sure,

We will definitely make it through!!!




"God I pray unto thee

I ask thou for my soul...

Shower your divine blessing upon us...

So, complete we may be!

Amen..."


© 2009 barricade


Author's Note

barricade
another one...result of the same rush of feelings...desperate for a vent...

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From the title I was expecting something totally different (I like looking into someone's eyes) but what I read was better then what I had in mind. Great piece. I can truly say that we women can be very unforgiving when we are in pain. We will take your number out our phone when we know the number by heart. lol

Live, love and Learn

Lady v

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I liked this a lot.So much of raw emotion,it simply pervaded..and reached us..the readers.If someone chose to lock the doors of their heart for the pain they have underwent,it is difficult to find the keys to them doors again.It is a painful experience,for both sufferer and the one who started it all..it is a continous cycle of emotions.Each one is at the end of the brunt,for once..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow nice poem with nice wording. awesome way to express your feelings. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

From the title I was expecting something totally different (I like looking into someone's eyes) but what I read was better then what I had in mind. Great piece. I can truly say that we women can be very unforgiving when we are in pain. We will take your number out our phone when we know the number by heart. lol

Live, love and Learn

Lady v

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You write your best in the 'rush of feelings' as you put it. And you never fail to disappoint. Great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's amazing, barricade.
Straight from the heart.
Keep exercising your talent/

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow..!! so truthful..and full of emotions..you expressed a true part of yourself...
thanks for sharing...
great work..!!^_^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well writing in y opinion is one of the best ways to vent in this world. Long time no speak my friend. Another beautiful heart felt piece.
"Despite of my heart's downpour
and the love for her that still overflows...
It's still unconditional and irrevocable...
But her harshness still renders us unable"
My favorite lines in this poem. And obvious flow of emotion is laced within these words. Great work my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Row interesting poem full of emotions.
GreetingsJola

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great. i could feel the emotion pouring out on this piece. isn't heartache a pain? i hate it. that's why i stay far away from relationships, taht way i don't get hurt. lol. good job barricade! you are def a great poet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

these words feel so real - i think the readers can feel your emotions while reading this - and poetry is such a good way to vent!
i like this one :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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