I'm your fool....

just some feelings that needed to be vent out.....

Your ignorance, it kills me...
Your name resounding in my head,
it stabs me...
These feelings in my heart,
they mock me...
Cos you just can't accept me,
and I just can't escape thee...
You unloved me, at your will,
just left me, dying...
My beating heart...
Now still...

Author's Note

Ode to a heart breaker...

Reviews

[poetic soul]

you unloved me!!!
my o my!!
that was so pricking!
thats how some people are....
they love and can even undo it at their whims and fancies...
too good!!!
short n crisp!
mayb a heart breaker doesnt need any more words to be wasted on them!!! ;)

:) Smile,
Krishna

[karmic]

We all have those moments where are heart is crushed and we believe it couldn’t take another beating, but time makes your heat strong again. Amazing work.

[Touché Armada]

aghhh, were they ever worth it? I think if you ever asked them they would tell you no.
Thats all I have for odes to fragile things.
sorry, I wish I could regain a little enthusiasm but itsa not commin.

[funeralmoon]

very nice, indeed a true poet and a poem for a poets heart.
* Moon

[Shellie]

I love it. You unloved me..... fabulous line. I mean saying 'You dont love me anymore' hurts also but 'you unloved me' is a much better way to say it. ...at your will..... thats good.... Well done!!!

[EpicKizzy]

very deep good write

[Stephanie]

Wow Vin...
That was intense. I felt every word of every line, it was so powerful and raw. This heartbreaker seems to be a guilty pleasure though; through the hurt and pain you can still have a longing for them... That's what those heartbreakers do. Make you love them when you want to hate them the most! Anyways, I loved this. One of my new favorites from you :)

[deeps]

This is amazing!
I really enjoyed this write.
Feelings very well expressed.

[Dev]

"You unloved me, at your will,
just left me, dying..." BRIL!!
I liked this alot..
The perfect ode to someone who didn't care enough.. Really nice !!