Memories...

"Flipping through the pages of my past,
Staring at the beautiful pictured memories
I made with you years back.
A breeze of nostalgia wraps me
and my lips curl up into a smile,
as I pause over an image of you.
Those feelings still so fresh,
subsided for so long,
yet ever so pure."

I just want to take this moment
to write down to you.
My words may not be perfect
but I wish to pass them through.

You were a beautiful friend,
and will always be...
We might not be here tomorrow,
or might not have time to free,
I will always cherish knowing you,
and I hope, you will remember me...

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was raw, raw emotions penned down on a piece of paper (or computer screen)
I mean, forget about the flaws regarding the structure or the flow, this is much beyond any flaw...This is raw man, extremely raw! And that I why I extremely loved it.
"A breeze of nostalgia wraps me
and my lips curl up into a smile,
as I pause over an image of you." - This was very heartfelt and painful at the same time..
Loved it!

[Divine Pain]

so sweet and original! Great write my friend!

[Sukriti Suki]

This is so so good. The flow is too good as if you were talking to me. Prose like, full of emotions and honestly written. Perfect.

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the sentiment was so touching, emotional piece. well done

[bubberloo]

Lovely :)

[poetic soul]

we all look for this hope....when our paths part from some special people....this is very nicely penned!!! liked the last stanza a lot...!!! :)

[Ayesha Atif]

Beautifully amazing.
Simple expressions used to define massive feelings.

Keep exercising your talent.

[Fredrick Malkyor]

I too share your passion for being remembered. I found this to be an excellent piece of work. Hopefully, one day you'll have your writings published in a book.

[♡Moon Child♡..]

so very pretty. I like it a lot. sometimes memories gives us the strength we need to move on with our life. Sometimes people say they wish they could forget, but I believe that memories make us the people we are today.

[Enigma]

Wow. Beautiful. Brimming with nostalgia, reminding me of all my friends, old and new alike. The rhymes are perfect, I love them.
Brilliantly written! Keep up the great work. :)