Sometimes the best poems come to us at the strangest times: for me it is when I'm driving, and don't happen to be able to write it down. That drives me crazy. Also, late at night spurs beautiful poems, like this one. Short but very meaningful. I liked the metaphors of a bandage, and I use soul in like 1/4 of my poems, because it is a good noun to use in a deep poem.
Very simple but beautfully heard. Some of the poets here over use words, I feel, to express the simplest of emotions. I loved not having to strain my mind to follow your train of thought. Thank you for sharing.
Sometimes the best poems come to us at the strangest times: for me it is when I'm driving, and don't happen to be able to write it down. That drives me crazy. Also, late at night spurs beautiful poems, like this one. Short but very meaningful. I liked the metaphors of a bandage, and I use soul in like 1/4 of my poems, because it is a good noun to use in a deep poem.
wow! well put! I wish we could cure our hearts like a we do a scrape or a cut with a band aid but unfortunately we have to be strong and push forward...
I wish that too! :(
But there is no remedy to a broken heart. It is painful to read, but nevertheless, it is brutally honest. Sometimes, our best work comes our from the hardest times of our life!