A bandage for the soul...

A bandage for the soul...

A Poem by barricade
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Wish there was a bandage,
For our wounded soul...
Or a strong adhesive,
To put us back together on the whole.


But a wounded soul,
Can never be bandaged...
When hope and faith,
Have left us stranded...

© 2013 barricade


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barricade
This is what happens when you stay up late at night :P

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Sometimes the best poems come to us at the strangest times: for me it is when I'm driving, and don't happen to be able to write it down. That drives me crazy. Also, late at night spurs beautiful poems, like this one. Short but very meaningful. I liked the metaphors of a bandage, and I use soul in like 1/4 of my poems, because it is a good noun to use in a deep poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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dont we all need a bandage,keep writing I like your style :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very simple but beautfully heard. Some of the poets here over use words, I feel, to express the simplest of emotions. I loved not having to strain my mind to follow your train of thought. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good things happen when you stay up late. :)

Lovely poetry. Loads of meaning. Simple language.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes the best poems come to us at the strangest times: for me it is when I'm driving, and don't happen to be able to write it down. That drives me crazy. Also, late at night spurs beautiful poems, like this one. Short but very meaningful. I liked the metaphors of a bandage, and I use soul in like 1/4 of my poems, because it is a good noun to use in a deep poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow! well put! I wish we could cure our hearts like a we do a scrape or a cut with a band aid but unfortunately we have to be strong and push forward...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I wish that too! :(
But there is no remedy to a broken heart. It is painful to read, but nevertheless, it is brutally honest. Sometimes, our best work comes our from the hardest times of our life!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really like this and can totally relate,funny how love and bandages often compliment each other

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can understand. There are always a few dark and gloomy thoughts lurking around the edges of our mind before we fall asleep.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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