To sleeping hills

To sleeping hills

A Poem by B.J
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A morning walk with nature, something we take for granted

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Fields so green ready to be discovered, walking this land
That anyone could discover, gaze across the field
To sleeping hills, watching and waiting

A mist gently floats about the sleeping hills
Like a blanket protecting the summit
The crisp air has a effervescence about it
The creek gleams as the sun reflects
Like a mirror to the morning
A fountain of reflections

Violets shy to the morning walkers
Along the banks, gently touch an opening bloom
Nature wears a morning smile
Greeting you with a perfumed walk

As the air warms, over the fresh running creek
Clamber over branches bent by nature
Weeping willows covered with emerald moss
Their story is never finished, it lingers on in nature

Above the forests trail, soft clouds
Float, gently touching kissing the forest
The rising sun creates beams of reflections
An arc to the heavens above
Gift wrapping the morning light
So proud

Morning light through a sleeping forest
The mountain now within sight
Like unwrapping a gift from the heavens above

© 2014 B.J


Author's Note

B.J
Trying to create images of a morning walk anywhere around the world

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I felt as if I were taking a walk within the beauties of nature, myself. You depicted this journey quite well and even added a spark of emotion within the lines, provoking deep thought. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


B.J

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate the comments.
Wonderfully said. Barb you created the universal morning walk. I will always be there in that morning where feet from all parts of the Earth gather in morning air.

Posted 9 Years Ago


B.J

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much after along time I now feel settled in the hils of Adelaide
I wanted to skip my walk today, your poem change my mind...thank you for such a beautiful write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


B.J

9 Years Ago

After moving about for the past 4 yrs I finally settled in the hills of South Australia, (my home st.. read more
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

Lucky you stay blessed my friend
B.J

9 Years Ago

thank you so much
What a beautiful nature write this is! A morning walk offers so much to those who are truly listening and watching. I enjoyed this. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


B.J

9 Years Ago

I love my walking where I live in the hills. You see so much in nature which is a special gift to ou.. read more

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Added on September 19, 2014
Last Updated on September 19, 2014
Tags: nature, fields, green, emerald, moss

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B.J
B.J

South Australia, Rural, Australia



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