Life?

Life?

A Poem by Bear
"

oh just what came to mind after reading of the 10 word poetry contest...

"

Life

might

be

easier

if

one

didn't

think

so

much.

© 2008 Bear


Author's Note

 Bear
didn't say it was good, just what came to mind.

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I like it, straight to the point and so true! Sometimes the concise one are the most powerful because they get right to the point! it isn't saying to become a drone and not to think, but not to over-analyze everything-which I have been accused of doing by my husband more than once!!!! probably it will speak mostly to those who have that problem.....who cannot sleep at night because there mind is in overdrive.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I agree completely. ha ha Thinking has a unique way of twisting and confusing us... especially, when you think way too much and start confusing yourself.... Although, I must confess (shhhh), I completely love thinking.... perhaps even perseverating...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:) Lovely! but... i think thinking is very important all the way trough life, and that is what can make a difference!!! I agree... some times it seams "we shouldn't think so much" about something: but may be it is because we should "brake the chain of "wrong thoughts" or we think "the other way round"! or if we thought only about "how to be happy" with what ever we have!!! ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Even though it didn't include Tovli's 10 words and you made up
your own into a poem that's ok. Made me smile and yes, I agree!

Helena

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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