breakdown.

breakdown.

A Poem by Zeek

Another breakdown tonight

Another emotion to fight.

Another vodka shot.

Another puff of pot.

Another ground up pill.

Another beast to kill.

Another clenched fist.

Another bloody wrist.

Another night to cry.

Another night to die.

© 2010 Zeek


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I like how you started every sentence with the word "Another" Really keeps the poem strong and going together! I think it's really interesting you did a nice job one this!!! Keep it up!

Posted 13 Years Ago
point taken.i love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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 Added on August 22, 2010
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Zeek
Zeek

Omaha, NE



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Hello all. I am Nina Butt. An odd name, is it not? You can call me Nina. Or Zeek. Whatever one you feel the need to. I am an odd ball. I have Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder Predominantly Una.. more..

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