Don't Leave

Don't Leave

A Poem by BeccaB

feelings can be the worst thing about being a human at times


When I leave I really need to know

If you will be there for me


I need to know for my own perace of mind

I need to know or my world won't go round


I want to see you in my darkest hour


When i feel so bad

My life fails to pleas


If you won't tell me now

So i can start and move on


It might not be important to you

But when i think of you


My minde just goes mad

I can't think of anything els

© 2013 BeccaB

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I like this Becca a lot... it's beautiful and I like the message. You create a poignant description of (yes) the struggles of being human and dealing with emotions. You just need to take care with your spelling (unless it's intentional?) Keep up the good work, nice write! :)

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Added on January 9, 2013
Last Updated on January 9, 2013



Darlington, County Durham, United Kingdom

I am a special kind of person....i try to finde the posetive in everything and life has been terrible i have had allot of heart ace and this is what drives me to look for the best in e.. more..

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